Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Proposal Argument (First Draft)

Myles Sachs

Professor Brown

English 1B

5 August 2013

Truth Through Drugs, Not Torture

            There is nothing “enhanced” about “enhanced interrogation”.  Various methods of torture have been used for centuries and most do not yield accurate results.  When the Bush Administration was forced into implementing a solution to retrieve information from suspected terrorists following the horrific events that transpired on September 11th, 2001 their attempt to solve a problem of getting answers was not only archaic and unethical, it ultimately failed.  The United States not only spends the most on health care per capita, it is also known as an innovator in the medical industry.  There hasn’t been any proof that enhanced interrogation actually worked, however there is proof that drugs have been effective at getting people to really speak what is on their mind.
            I would propose that drugs are used in place of various mental and physical torture methods as a way to obtain accurate information without inflicting any physical pain.  One of the most commonly overlooked reasons in regards to using drugs over torture is that they don’t inflict any physical pain when used correctly.  Drugs have also been proven to work when it comes to obtaining accurate and reliable information unlike torture.  When drugs are used in place of torture, they also don’t cause the same degree of mental damage that a torture method such as a waterboarding session would.  Similar, if not the same types of drugs are used regularly in the medical industry and have proven to be safe and effective without any long term damage unlike torture methods.
            Drugs should be used in place of torture to obtain accurate information from suspected terrorists while minimizing the impact of their long term health.  Some reasons supporting my proposal include: they do not inflict physical pain and they can effectively produce accurate information.  There is simply no contest when it comes to comparing the amount of pain caused by a needle as opposed to a commonly employed torture tactic such as sleep deprivation.  There is practically no physical pain when it comes to injecting a substance.  Imagine yourself at the doctor’s office getting an annual flu shot or a vaccination, sure you might feel a stinging sensation at the point of injection however it is minimal compared to torture and is very short term.  An article describes the process: “The drug is injected slowly into a vein in order to induce a relaxed state of mind in which the suspect becomes more talkative and has less emotional control” (Macdonald 259).  The procedure is quick and doesn’t cause anywhere near as much physical pain as torture would.
            Unlike the use of torture, drugs have had more success in producing accurate information.  As I mentioned the process of injecting drugs, the purpose of it (which makes a suspect become more talkative and have less emotional control) is an example I am sure most of you can relate to.  A recent example is when I went bar hopping with my best friend.  I only had a couple drinks because I nobly insisted that I would be the designated driver.  I didn’t really feel any different; however my best friend consumed a lot of alcohol before we decided to go on a walk.  The first thing I noticed is that he was much more talkative and didn’t hesitate to share whatever crossed his mind.  It was almost like he opened the flood gates and the secrets he internalized came surging out.  He also seemed intent on providing each and every detail no matter how insignificant.  The information seemed to be accurate because the next time I saw him sober he wondered how I found out so much personal information.  A U.S. News article outlines the effect of a hormone known as oxytocin on obtaining accurate information by creating a sense of trust: “Instead of using interrogation techniques that threaten to harm detainees and have been repeatedly proven to be ineffective, interrogators could play "good cop" with detainees. With the added edge of oxytocin, they could "tip the balances a little” (qtd. in Koebler 1).  The bottom line is that substances can really be effective at obtaining accurate information.
            As with most controversial issues, there is almost always opposition and alternate proposals to address the issue at hand.  The proposal I have created is indeed illegal, however it would appear to be more ethical than torture because it doesn’t cause any long term damage and some drugs have the same effect as legal substances such as alcohol.  Some could also argue that using drugs is unsafe because they can be deadly if used in high doses.  Another counterclaim would be extracting inaccurate information, while it might be true that not all information received from someone who is under the influence of mind altering substances is reliable, the amount of accurate information obtained from drug assisted interrogation is much higher than information received from torture.  An alternate proposal to this problem would be from the current United States President Barack Obama.  He recently signed executive orders closing the Guantanamo Bay detention camp which would effectively end the secret prisons operated by the CIA.  The order also required all interrogations are subject to following the procedures in the Army Field Manual.  President Obama mentioned his intentions with his proposal in a New York Times article: “We intend to win this fight,” he said. “We are going to win it on our own terms” (qtd. in Shane, Mazzetti and Cooper).  Even though there are alternatives and opposition, my solution would work especially if the use of drugs on terrorists was made legal in place of torture. 
            The solution I proposed to the issue of torture makes sense because it can effectively extract accurate information without virtually any pain or suffering.  The opposition would lead you to believe that it is unethical and violates human rights; however it would make sense in certain circumstances to drug a suspected terrorist especially when lives are at stake.  Even though President Obama enacted his version of a solution to this problem, it is only a step in the right direction and not the major jump the United States needs.  If you knew that drugging someone prior to asking them questions would help obtain the answers you’re looking for as opposed to an ineffective method such as waterboarding, which method would you use?



Works Cited
Koebler, Jason. "Oxytocin, the 'Trust Hormone,' Could Become New Interrogation Tool." U.S. News. U.S. News & World Report LP, 15 May 2012. Web. 6 Aug. 2013. <http://www.usnews.com/news/articles/2012/05/15/oxytocin-the-trust-hormone-could-become-new-interrogation-tool>.
Macdonald, John M. "Truth Serum." JSTOR. ITHAKA, Aug. 1955. Web. 6 Aug. 2013. <http://www.jstor.org/stable/1139862>.
Shane, Scott, Mark Mazzetti, and Helene Cooper. "Obama Reverses Key Bush Security Policies." The New York Times. The New York Times Company, 22 Jan. 2009. Web. 6 Aug. 2013. <http://www.nytimes.com/2009/01/23/us/politics/23obama.html?pagewanted=all>.


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